Chapter: The Elders

Information relevant to the 10th chapter of The Standing Dead

the Route South from Osrakum
the route south

This is the map I used when writing The Standing Dead and The Darkness Under The Trees. It shows some of my earlier, not fully-developed ideas. For example, the Earthsky was originally called the Undersky; the Upper Reach was originally the City of Hides, and the Koppie was not only much further east than it ended up, but I was also at that time using the Afrikaans spelling, “Kopje”

I have included this map to show the route—the orange line—that Carnelian and Osidian take from Osrakum to the Koppie. From the camp the slavers make on that first night, it moves west of the Great South Road, crossed another road running west. Sometime after that, the slavers move back onto the road. The point at which they run into the Plainsmen is marked with a red circle. Thereafter they go cross-country towards Makar. The dragon scouring line is shown in bright green. It is when they encounter this that they pass through the Ringwall and out of the Guarded Land

The crossing of the swamp is approximated; their route is not so direct. The point at which they come up onto the Earthsky plateau is shown, as is the route that they take from there to the koppie of the Twostone—labelled “massacre”. From there they follow the Backbone south until they reach the Koppie of the Ochre

the koppies of the Plainsmen
original concept for a koppie

A “koppie” is a small volcanic extrusion emerging out of a plain and is the name given to such features that occur throughout Southern Africa. The Earthsky is scattered with them. It is on and around these natural ‘islands’, in the midst of the endless fernland of the plain, that the Plainsmen make their homes. As the location of so much of The Standing Dead, I had to take care in exploring and understanding the topography of koppies: the Koppie of the Ochre in particular

The sketch shows my original conception of a koppie. If I remember correctly, the photograph is of a koppie in Nigeria; it became the model for the Koppie. Notice how I have imagined how the cluster of rocks might appear from above. It is into the cleft between two of them that I inserted the Ancestor House of the Ochre. Note also the scribble on the right, showing one of the cedars or mother trees, each with its associated hearth

a panoramic view of the Koppie
a panoramic view of the Koppie

The second sketch, though of the Koppie of the Ochre, gives a good idea of what any Plainsman koppie would look like. Note the circular, concentric ditches, crossed over by earthbridges. In this sketch, I have only drawn in a few cedars—the hill would be densely covered in them

the Koppie of the Ochre

The first sketch shows, roughly, what you would see if you were standing on the edge of the Outditch. The inner ferngardens lead to the Homeditch, that is like a moat for the hill that rises to the Crag. It is upon this hill, the Grove, that the mother trees grow—cedars that are sacred to the Plainsmen. Only a few of these trees are shown—there should be enough to cover the whole hill. The other line of trees are the magnolias lining the Lagooning

a panoramic view of the Koppie
a panoramic view of the Koppie
the Koppie, home of the Ochre tribe
the Koppie, home of the Ochre tribe

The second diagram shows the original map of the Koppie that I refined throughout the writing of The Standing Dead. Neil Gower worked from this to produce his version for publication.

map of the Koppie © Neil Gower
map of the Koppie © Neil Gower

In the bottom left you will see the faint remnants of the bloodwood tree and the killing field, showing their original position. This was changed once I better understood that the direction of the prevailing wind was an easterly. The location of the field in which the Ochre slaughter earthers has been chosen so that the scent of blood travels as far as it can before reaching the open fernland where it might attract the unwanted attention of raveners

the Grove

The Grove is the collection of cedars, or mother trees, covering the slopes of the hill that rises at the centre of the Koppie. All the koppies of the Plainsmen are built around such a hill, and the grove of the Ochre is typical

the hill at the heart of the Koppie, a cedar grove
the hill at the heart of the Koppie, a cedar grove

The first diagram is a rough sketch showing this mound, surrounded by the Homeditch (only a few of the cedars are shown). At the very summit of the hill, at the heart of the Grove, is the Crag—rocks that rise above the cedars among which is built the Ancestor House of the Ochre, and upon the summit of which they expose their dead

the Grove of the Koppie, home of the Ochre
the Grove © Neil Gower

The second diagram shows the original map of the Grove that I used throughout the writing of The Standing Dead. (To read the labels, it might be easier to refer to Neil Gower’s version.) The small dark circles indicate the trunks of individual cedars. Those with crosses are trees belonging to a ‘hearth’. The larger circles give an indication of how far the branches of each tree extend and thus the extent of each hearth’s ‘rootearth’ or territory.

Note how more densely packed are the cedars around the Homeditch—this is so that their roots will reinforce the walls of the ditch. Also of note are the various ‘rootstairs’ that wind down the slopes, along the edges of the various rootearths, to the gates and earthbridges that cross the Homeditch to the ferngardens

the three massive boulders of the Crag

At the centre of the Grove are located the three immense boulders that together form the Crag. The square nestling between two of them, to the north, is the Ancestor House. The other square to the east is the cistern. Touching this, to the south-east, is the rootearth of Akaisha’s hearth

The third diagram is a detail from the Grove map. I have included this so that it is easier to see the Crag and Akaisha’s mother tree in particular. Both the actual hearth and the hollow where Carnelian and Osidian sleep are marked

Note also the clearing that the Ancestor House looks down into

the Crag and the Ancestor House
the Ancestor House of the Ochre perched on its Crag

The first sketch shows the Crag—lying at the heart of the Grove—as it might appear to someone standing in the clearing below the Ancestor House

This was my original conception derived from the second diagram. As it came to be used in The Standing Dead, the scale should be perhaps a little larger… but not much. It should also be noted that I decided to move the cistern from where it is shown on the diagrams

plan and side view of the Crag of the Ochre Tribe
plan and side view of the Crag of the Ochre Tribe

Steps cut into the rock climb to the Ancestor House, rising past it to the summit. It is on the summit, upon funerary trestles, that the Ochre expose their male dead for sky burial

Each koppie has an Ancestor House built somewhere up its crags—so that it is neither in the territory of the Earth Mother nor of the Sky Father. This chamber is completely lined with a mosaic of the skeletal remains of a tribes’ dead. The floor is covered with the pelvic bones and the lower walls with the skulls of dead women. The ceiling is covered with the arm and leg bones and the upper walls by the skulls of dead men. Between them is a frieze composed entirely of the skulls of children

The bones that line it produce a screen that intensifies an Ancestor House’s connection with earth and sky. Women walk barefoot on this, with their heads covered. Men walk shod until they reach their chairs—built on a base of children’s skulls, with men’s bones for seats and with long backs reaching up to the ceiling

as imagined by Mark Harrison
the cover for the US First Edition edition of The Standing Dead © Mark Harrison
The Standing Dead © Mark Harrison

This is the cover by Mark Harrison for the US First Edition of The Standing Dead (that has become the two volumes of the Second Edition, The Standing Dead and The Darkness Under The Trees). It shows his imagining of the Crag and Ancestor House of the Ochre. Note his take on the funerary trestles upon which the male dead are exposed for sky-burial